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starry sky lashes

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she's the girl
with the dark
ebony
hair, and the
blue moon eyes.

the fragile one
with cobweb bones,
alabaster
skin, and an oh-
so-broken soul.

she's the girl with a
deepdark secret, the
starry sky lashes,
and a little cracked
heart made out of glass.

she's the one you
pray you won't be-
come, because her
breath smells of death
and alcohol.

you see the
girl with the
blue moon eyes
and the heart
made of glass,

and say:
not the cobweb bones,
nor the alabaster skin,
no, not even the
oh-so-broken soul

could ever make me love her.
Interpret this however the hell you want. I know I've got not clue what it's about.

I tried doing some sort of format for this poem, and I think it really makes me write better poetry, since it makes me actually think about what I'm writing. This poem took me 35 minutes to write. Usually it takes 5.

First stanza has 3 syllables, second has 4, third has 5, fourth has 4, fifth has 3. Then the rest... is sorta just free for all.

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